A Piece of Me

The poems in this section are pieces from a new poetry book called A Piece of Me ordering details are on this blogsite. All feed positive or negative is appreciated.

Gone

Sun sets on the love we have for each other

A refusal to give up on what”s obvious

A pair so unique they can’t recognize what they have

Major one, minor ones

Problems that is Nothing too great for Him

 

Questions to the reader; What do you feel? What is the author trying to say?

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4 thoughts on “A Piece of Me

  1. I feel sad that two people can’t see the connection that they have. Sometimes it is the minor things that we can’t accept in a relationship. When you know you have the “one” there are no major or minor that you both can’t accept and tolerate, or change.

    Gone is meaning for me that I have done all I can do and so has that person. W e are position in each other lives for the lesson and the time. So bye and allow for the next sweet experience, I hope 🙂 !

  2. Skyy8,

    I agree sometimes we don’t recognize when people have been placed in our lives for a reason. We try to make them season or lifetime people. Who are we kidding their are just some people who are better for you than others. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my blog. Please visit often.

    1. Tononiya D.,

      You have given a very close synopsis on what I was feeling just from the excerpt. I appreciate your comments. Please email me with your writings I would like to feature you on the writer of the day.

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