Gone part of a poem within A Piece of Me

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Gone

Ego and Pride keep them at odds

The other one wants that very thing

I want to give in.

Too lazy to do something different

The light goes off on our love.

Struggling, wanting, realizing

We want it

Flickering starts

The sun rises to the beginning

The first day of our new life.

What do you think of this poem? Did the writer capture your attention? What are your thoughts on the writing?

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